Thank you so much for writing this. Your prose/style is very engaging. As others have said, your use of structure is excellent. That little bit of non-linearity makes those memory sequences stand out and really, really hit. You've got a real talent for this and I can't wait to read/experience more of your work!
I just discovered this and saved it to play some time in the near future, but as a queer person who's gone through wilderness therapy boy oh boy am I excited to see what's in store!! <33
i'm in love with the writing and tone, as well as how you manipulate structure to further convey the main character's emotions. honestly, stunned. on the edge of my seat the entire time. this is incredible. i consider myself really lucky to play it :)
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Thank you so much for writing this. Your prose/style is very engaging. As others have said, your use of structure is excellent. That little bit of non-linearity makes those memory sequences stand out and really, really hit. You've got a real talent for this and I can't wait to read/experience more of your work!
I haven't cried like this since my father's funeral.
wow. i have so many emotions and i don't know how to express them here. sometimes you just have to keep walking.
I just discovered this and saved it to play some time in the near future, but as a queer person who's gone through wilderness therapy boy oh boy am I excited to see what's in store!! <33
Brilliant. Just brilliant.
Your writing has made me cry before, but this was new. Thank you. I feel like that's a weird thing to say, but I need to thank you for this.
wow.
i'm in love with the writing and tone, as well as how you manipulate structure to further convey the main character's emotions. honestly, stunned. on the edge of my seat the entire time. this is incredible. i consider myself really lucky to play it :)
thank you so much 💕